It was funny for the first couple of scenes
But then it got really repetitive. The script was made up of nothing but one liners. Character A: say thing they must do. Character B: Let me guess..../ Okay so I have to.... etc etc. You could've made a top ten list and it still would exhibit the same thing as this flash. It was creative the for the first couple of scenes, but after that, it just got redundant.
Graphically, its nice looking but its also one demensional. Mouth moves, characters just stand there until their line is done and then walk out.
Good idea, but executed with to many numerous flaws.